Kristen B.

With 20+ years of experience writing and publishing fiction, I specialize in commercial thrillers, mysteries, and page-turning stories that keep readers hooked from the first chapter. I turn rough drafts into tight, commercial novels by strengthening pacing, sharpening tension, and tightening scenes. I'm happy to help with writing, ghostwriting, developmental editing, and beta reading. I help with big and small issues such as plot, pacing, character development, dialogue, clarity, restructuring, developmental editing and deep story critique, plot holes, logic gaps, and sagging middle sections. I give honest, constructive feedback with a focus on making the story more compelling. I love working with upmarket, commercial, mystery, thrillers, suspense, fantasy, and emotionally driven fiction (a good story in any genre). For ghostwriting, I use your outline and material to create a gripping novel, adding character depth, chapters, more conflict if needed, all while bringing your vision to life. Send me a message and tell me where you're stuck, and what you'd like help with!